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What is the most effective way to revise sentence 21?



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4 What is the most effective way to revise sentence 21?

  1. Because it’s astounding to me, Texas has one of the lowest voter turnout rates in the United States.

  2. It’s astounding to me what Texas has being one of the lowest voter turnout rates in the United States.

  3. It’s astounding to me that Texas has one of the lowest voter turnout rates in the United States.

  4. As astounding as it is, it’s also shocking that Texas has one of the lowest voter turnout rates in the United States.


5 The meaning of sentence 23 is unclear. What is the most effective way to clarify the meaning of this sentence?

  1. Change sometimes to there are times when

  2. Change population to citizenry

  3. Change chooses to selects

  4. Change them to those important decisions


6 Damian needs a stronger closing for his paper. Which sentences should he add after sentence 28 to bring his paper to a more effective conclusion?

  1. You must be the one who changes this. It isn’t fair to make others think they have all the rights.

  2. Don’t be lazy. Get off the couch and do something that matters.

  3. When Election Day comes, go to the polls and cast your vote. It’s not only your right but also your responsibility.

  4. You’ll feel better if you persuade people to vote. You can help make your community more vibrant.



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