A. Attention-Getter – Statistic- As of the 2010 census, there were approximately 8,000 pure Hawaiian left, less than 8 percent of the population of that time. That was five years ago. Try to imagine now, how much pure Hawaiian are left. Since there isn’t that many left, we have resorted to keeping the culture alive. My grandmother, Betty Olivera was one of the people that kept the culture alive.
B. Link To Thesis – It is telling how much pure Hawaiians are left and it is connecting to the continuation of the culture in which I am making my grandmother out to be.
C. Thesis Statement – My Kupuna, Betty Olivera, was an ideal Hawaiian person of her age.
D. Preview of Points- She is (morally rooted), (Interdependent), and (culturally strong).
a. Subpoint 1- when she was alive, she would enforce the Hawaiian values when I was younger. She would tell me to act pono and to mālama the ʻāina. I considered her the embodiment of my Hawaiian side.
b. Subpoint 2- when I was in Kindergarten, she lived with us, I used to read aloud with her and she would correct me to help in my pronunciation. She wouldn’t just let me say the word wrong because it would make me better.
a. Subpoint 1- Hawaiian culture wasn’t as heavily supported back then as it is now. They enforced speaking English in school. “Back then people in Hawaii expressed the Hawaiian values. Now days, people don’t show the Hawaiian values as prominently.”- Lydia
b. Subpoint 2- Danced hula in a Halau in her early twenties and traveled the country.
A. Restate Thesis – My Kupuna, Betty was an ideal Hawaiian person of her age.
B. Review of Points - She was (attribute 1), (Interdependent), and (culturally strong).
C. Closing Statement – Quote – “ A people without the knowledge of there past history, origin and culture is like a tree without roots.” – Marcus Garvey. Now days, we need people like that, who are culturally rooted that perpetuate the culture. In her time on Earth, she did just that.
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Bureau, Census. "United States Census Bureau." Hawaii QuickFacts from the US Census Bureau. U.S. Department of Commerce, 1 Apr. 2010. Web. 07 Mar. 2015. .